Page 25 Revised
Just a quick note that page 25 was revised today. Nothing drastic. In the balloon where the boy is holding the broken skrit shell, I switched it so that he is holding it in his left hand. Why, you ask? Well, for those that may be a little lost in this whole thing, I am trying to use the thought balloons to stand in for action taking place in ‘reality’. So for the balloon in question, the boy picking up the skrit shell stands in for me picking up the blood monitor. To strengthen this association, I thought it best that the boy use the same hand as I do to hold the monitor in the next panel. This way, the boys left hand holding the shell rhymes visually with my left hand holding the monitor.
Here are the two pages:
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